By parul10 Jun, 2010 shiva sankar, toonay bivek ko kaha toh aacha nhi hoga
By shiva03 Jun, 2010 not bad but watch the spellings
p.s now i understand why u got 73 in english
By Paridhi28 May, 2010 heyy bivek...nyc poetry mahn..luved it..
awsumm writings..ghr88 work dude..keep it up..!
By parul28 May, 2010 u write good
By Manoj Pratap13 May, 2010 manoj pratap singh ki jai!!!!
By rishab13 Apr, 2010 main bhi aaraha hoon es sunday
By Pratikshit12 Apr, 2010 chal fir is sunday chalte hain!!!
ICICI ya SBI. LOL!!!
Red Sunday another good 1.!!!
keep up the good work
By Pratikshit23 Mar, 2010 life's on---- rank 1
Girls are dacoit --- rank 2
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pata nahi kyon par life's on mein kuch to baat hai......it feels good when u read it...and it feels even better when u imagine it.
gud work bro!!
By mary_j_rose22 Mar, 2010 nice work,
u can visit mine,if u lke,
love u dear....
By markjharris20 Mar, 2010 awww this is really good like it blowed me away keep them coming...
By vj-vikas19 Mar, 2010 life toh raat main hi on thi, thoda aur vaishi pann hota toh maazaa aa jataa,
still quite awesome attempt.
waiting for more......
vj vikas
By mukund.112619 Mar, 2010 i feel the same manner as u buddy,awsm wriring, keeep up d gud work.....
By rahul17 Mar, 2010 classic man
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